This was the first draft of my contents page. Although they picture was strong and I like the way I had layed out the contents title there were several things I felt needed to be changed. The picture was centralized just like my front cover and this made it too repetitive, so I have decided to move my model to the side. The pulled out quote will therefore no longer be needed as it was just filling up space and looked rather out of place. Secondly, the text fades into the background so I will need to create a border behind the text along the side to ensure that the text is readable. My final problem with my contents page is that my model could stand out more, if I use Photoshop to manipulate the photo and make her brighter in contrast to the dark background it will make the page a lot stronger. These are the problems with my first draft and what I hope to change.
This is going exceedingly well. The page is slightly out of balance. Use hand drawn sketches to work out the composition to use for a more developed contents page.
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